Main ares to improve for the class: 1. Less general thesis statements; 2. Have a bold, even siprising, main point to your essay: 3. Develop the main idea through the essay.
Specific notes for me:
My main area of improvement is the ability to bring out main idea more in the thesis, as well as, the beggining of the essay.
What more than anything else would you like to improve on in your next essay? Sentence writing? Ideas?
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