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Main ares to improve for the class: 1. Less general thesis statements; 2. Have a bold, even siprising, main point to your essay: 3. Develop the main idea through the essay. Specific notes for me: My main area of improvement is the ability to bring out main idea more in the thesis, as well as, the beggining of the essay.

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  1. What more than anything else would you like to improve on in your next essay? Sentence writing? Ideas?

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